Voted For: Cdusit

imma give this one to Cdusit, although it was quite close. Cdusit's structure was a lot more even (maybe a couple of bars were stretched) than SD's, plus SD had a 7 line verse which makes it end a bit weaker. i was feelin' Cdusit's punches quite a lot more aswell especially his closer:

I guess i shouldnt be so hard and end this on a freindly note
but Street Scripture reminds me of broke resturant customers....
........cant pay so he pretend he choked!!!!
^^^that was hot lol

i liked your opener SD, but i think it kinda fell off from there, and you also used quite a basic rhyme scheme. There's always room for elevation though, so work on usin' more complex vocab and bein more creative wit your punches, cuz that wins battles.

quite close but i gotta give this one to Cdusit

no hate....

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