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Old 11-13-05, 06:53 PM   #29
Vaskez
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rev's sliding down and spinning in cirlces, see, we hate it,
n i'd take a swing at ya...
...but this fat fuck would probably break it,

^^see now this WOULD work nicely if taking a swing at him made sense in the playground type swing meaning of the word as well. But as I keep saying to people IMO the WHOLE sentence has to make sense substituting either of the word's possible meanings into it (like my punch this week). And this only works one way. Woulda worked if said say, "I ain't gonna let this fat fuck even try to hit me, I'd let him try to swing but he'd prob break it"

Even though Rev's punch wasn't actually that witty it was a straight personal and it does hit. EC woulda won with better wording

v/Rev

go vote on champ match if ya havent pls
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