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Old 11-14-05, 01:47 PM   #5
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Voted For: Drakel

Drakel:
came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
NO..2/10
you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
ok wordplay...5/10
check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
MEH.... 4/10
so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
NO...3/10
no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
hmmm...2/10
16/50

Spit wasnt that great, you had some ok wordplay, and flow.


Premanition:
‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
niice punch...6/10
Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
WRONG... 2/10
Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
lol...5/10
Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell
MEH...4/10
17/50

You had a better flow, stronger punches.. and good wordplay.


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