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Whatt up duke?
First of all, this was a pretty nice piece though, I can see you love playin' with vocab and multis..Shit is always good to play with to make a drop hotter
A disgraced situation how you face castration ready to
Neuter your computer better hire a tutor and steady crew
If I remove your nuts you’ll groove as a hardcore slut
bury this jerk and his literary work and just ignore your butt
^^^^^^The beginning lines and the second lines I liked because it showed flow, vocab and multis skills at its finest..
Now, the problem is, most of the lines in this peice were too long or they didn't make relations to the topic u posted. Well to me it didnt anyways.. Some got off topic for instance
your rhymes suck so sign up for Burger King talk to Santa Claus
^^^^^Umm okay? No sense what so ever..
some ridiculous animals such as whales I touch mass trails study botanicals
^^^^Liked what was said, but it was too long..
Overall, this was a nice drop fa sure, but in my opinion try to shorten down your lines and make sure u stay on topic unless its like a keystyle or suttin'
keep doin' u
HoFFa
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