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Old 11-15-05, 10:16 AM   #7
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Voted For: Cdusit

Cdusit:
never thought id battle a kid who hasnt posted ten times
this battles unreal ....like dudes got pretend rhymes
ok punch - 4/10
his first time on the frontlines..but name states war
Im controlling his outcome....like a position in saw
Didnt Rhyme - 3/10
The decision is raw im submitting his gore kids hitting th floor
War needs more support in this battle like double D's
Again - 3/10
Unsure why he even stepped up maybe newbs like defeat
maybe he likes to be left behind like a bikers seat
How is that left behind? - 2/10
like repeat this feels like a case of de ja vu
cause not even ya alias voting ring could com thru
Good Punch - 4/10
16/50

You had some good punches, the flow was pretty good, some words didnt rhyme though.

allik war:
excuse me son u think this daycare,
u knew 2 da game nigga i dont care,
No Punch - 1/10
jus spit yo 16 nigga n challenge if u dare,
so if ya in da wrong room please exit there//
NO - 2/10
i shatter punchlinewhen i push up when its crunch time,
i give lines meaning n life but through my pain n strife,
NO - 1/10
ya soon 2 be wife and dis game is mine,
my system of words blocks competition,
Didnt Rhyme - 1/10
like ya corner gas station atm reciept reads declined,
im inclined,2 b on da grind//
OK - 3/10

spittin venemous verses,leavin ya cursin,
go beserk,while im jerkin ya girls bra strap,stop put down da gun son rememba this only rap//
BaD - 1/10
11/60

You didnt really have wordplay or strong punches, work on more creative shit, and a bigger vocab.

Vote - Cd
no seriously,its not dat serious its flow,i know ya gettin delirious,im fearless,but by da end evryone on here but u will b tearless!//
MEH - 2/10
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