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Old 11-15-05, 03:51 PM   #119
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From: Bethany ontario canada
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Voted For: Daubs

aight nice battle playas

natural killaz nice rhymes but i had to read them over and over for it to make sense cuz ya structure was everywhere
werk on ya flow too, everything else looked good though

Daubs nice battle man you had the flow and ya rhymes were dope man but your structure could use a bit of a tune up aswell, anyway i give this to daubs cuz his rhymes flow and his werdplay were hands down better than natural killaz
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