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Old 11-15-05, 04:13 PM   #15
O.V.Dose
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i like the beat. the flow wasnt bad......you sound kinda like chris brown lol. run it run it....anyways lol. you dont sound very confident on the mic....its good start but you need to work on your delivery / emotion...especially on this type of track. lyrics were aiight...you could up your vocab. im not really feelin the hook. you need something a lil more catchy. but overall it wasnt a bad track


id appreciate if you could hit this up: O.V.Dose ft. Detox - Home of the Cougars
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