listening...damn u dropping tracks like hell....lol

beat is pretty good..kinda got an old western feel to it...

speats comes in...

seems like your rushing a couple of your words...one part on your over dubs...its too loud..and makes a bad noise..or it could just be my computer....

the hiss on the hook is kinda bad...i cant really understand what your saying that much...id try to clear that up a lil...

like i said in my other feed...kinda seems hesitant in the flow...but this one isnt as bad...its a lot more smooth...but u still gotta work on that..some of your overdubs are off....try to get them on...they can make the track that much better....


overall.....not a bad track....keep it up....and please rtf on mine and black magiks songs called Gotta Keep Ya Head Up
thanks

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