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11-16-05, 02:08 PM
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Adam
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Sweet imagery, and great vocab in this piece. The message is strong, clear, and comes across good. Most of the metaphors were good. I enjoyed it. The flow could have been a bit better, but other than that. Sweet OM..
Good drop..
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