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Old 11-16-05, 04:37 PM   #12
veyetal
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Voted For: Blackmage

You Herb, would someone make my bud wiser..? sry i asked em
His Core's light, Gkilla? Right you're the son of sam....adams
>okay, wording is a lil off, but decent
I'm notorious for handlin my B.I.,G Killa's hatin
all you killin's my expectations and your reputation
>too basic
speculation? Nah 47 wins. are we talkin? No!
cause besides my name in your sig you have nothing to show
>again, basic
and about you there's even less to know, you're due to die
your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide
>decent
who am I? ask around bout my legacy if yoyu doubtful
you got as much of a chance as your crew vs. the council
>meh
I'll help you, punch my self wit my mad reacher
I'm comin out of the closet....
....but wouldn't that make you the fag preacher?
>meh
You ain't LL to be A legend most have to die I guess then
you're on your period, funny i beat you with 6 questions
>meh
here's your lesson, my verse, but you must be killin it again
cause everytime you battle someone they're born again
.................................................. ................with a win
>aight

decent verse, nothing really spectacular, probly sound pretty decent audio, just nothing too special, basic mostly, but still decent, word


Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill...
Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still...
>boring
I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit...
Rebuilding from the ground up but you stay grounded...
>nothing
Blacks on my next stop to get played like an X-Box...
Tried joinin a crew but hes hard to pick like a lock...
>basic
Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument...
Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent...
>basic, and it just sounds gay
Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked...
Name is a title cuz punches get read like a book did...
>yes, punches are read
Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script...
Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it...
>okay?
Kids skills slippin' like we were rappin' in a 'arena'...
Mage's career is fake, like he's the black John Cena...
>stupid
I got him sapinaed to court because he "murdered rap"...
No hard punches and weak flow I know you heard of that...
>yes, i heard of it, and actually read it in your verse

waaaay too basic, and not creative at all...both need to try harder, but v/black mage for consistency in punches, and having a couple effective ones, word
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