lmao you wanna know whats wrong with this?

1. Whys his head on a building roof top alone?
2. I hate that text.
3. The reason for the black was... Its not even a good fade from normal to black

Tips.. Scrap it, Make a bigger scope with covers more of his body witht he circle on his forehead, from a view on top of a rooftop etc, would ook 10x better.

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