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Old 11-16-05, 07:23 PM   #8
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Technique-Ok..your bassically making some dumb ass punches.Your concepts MAY have potential,but your wording was horrible.Look at your first bar..your bassically just saying shit becuz it rhymes.Your focusing on getting those internals in there as opposed to wording your punches to hit harder.And that lady's perfume line...that sounds like something a 2th grader would say in the caferteria while talking shit with his buddies.
WEAK VERSE

Blisss-Way better verse than technique's.As soon as I read your verse bar,I knew the battle was done due to technique dropping garbage,YourWeakest bar was your 2nd one,with the canary one..and that wasn't even that bad.

So..
Vote-Blisss
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