V/ - Daubs

Daubs bar was pretty weak, he had a played concept he worked with and forced his wordplay in the second line with the "apple" part.
Macca, also very weak bar, forced the wordplay, there is no need to capitalise parts of your bars, and also it did rhyme, but not that well, that was the main reason why your bar was so weak, the concept was also played to.

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