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Voted For: SEIK
wow ... first off.. ya both need to elevate... especially that dude bliss... that was prolly the worst shyt i heard in audio since i been a member.. ya flow is off... ya rhymes are simple... and to top it off ya lines are all over the place... no structure... no mic presence... no attitude... no nothing... ya want some pointers holla at me on aim... werd
seik... flow was waaayyyyy better but ya rhymes were kiddish... those are nursery rhymes holmes and that don't cut it in a battle... you gotta hit to da gut... ya ain't gotta get all fancy with ya shyt or nothing but at least try and make ya lines connect... they should flow effortlessly from one to another... ya ideas should kinda gel together instead of just jumping out at kats randomly... on the other hand ya joint had a freestyle feel to it which is a quality that's missing from battles nowadays... props for that... but definitely step ya vocab up
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