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Originally Posted by L. Veracity
all your RV Idol shit...you need to work on your flow...your prescence is okay and you got a good voice for rap, you just need to work on your flow...and yeah, I could say that politely, but you're the type to take offense to REAL ass criticism so I say it in a rude way cuz you'll just try and clown NEway...that being said..........
work on your flow you cock sucking buZZard, you're trash and all ya RV Idol shit blew!! |
lol @ all my rv shit.
I had only 1 track that was wack in rv idol
and it was that story tellin track
and the ONLY reason why THAT sucked is because My vocals had moved out of place in CEP and I couldnt put it back on beat to save my life.
So I did anything and turned it in.
Besides that, everything I had for the rv rap idol was dope.
Up until that story tellin track, I was thought most likely to win, along with Ike.
wtf are you talkin about?
now when it comes to naming a few of YOUR songs that sucks, I can go on for days...
your verse for the rap game track was weak as hell.
no one could understand a word you was sayin
so, I got the lyrics
come on the track spittin’ that crack, my ego’s bigger than Shaq
you was straight up lyin about spittin crack, but you right, ya ego IS bigger than Shaq
I hittiin’ the front, hittin’ the back we’ll put a Timb to ya…SMACK
had absolutely NO variation in your damn voice. no emphasis on "SMACK"
when ya lips touch ya skuLL, yeah that’s how you hoLLa back
I see what you was tryin to do here. lmfao, what the fuck do my skull have to do with my back? wack shit!
see Will talkin’ slack, but I’ll react with an attack
yeah, this PROVES I couldnt understand what the fuck you was sayin. I heard th entire track, but I actually didnt know you was dissin me until I read the lyrics. SMH, your voice and microphones do NOT go together. find a new hobby
and leave his eyes bugged out his name was Bernie Mack
WOW, This is BURSTING with creativity. 
yeah,m great flow, but it lacked substance :-\
moving along
Children Cry
Im feelin the beat, no hate there
you come on rappin, I already hate the track.
NEXT!
DO WUT YOU DO
Already, you say you HAVE to peep the lyrics, because your voice is so irritable that its more entertaining readin you then hearin you
but actually, Im feelin this song. its not too bad so far. I just peeped the 2nd verse.
the 2nd verse was about one of your lesbian bitches cheatin on you. Couldnt relate to that, especially since Im a sex god and once one of my hoes get the dick, they dont even think about cheatin on me, next song
So Crazy
song is garbage, the first dude sounds retarded, and so does everyone else on the track. you came the 2nd worst. that Yung P nigga was trash. Go figure, 5 trash niggas on 1 trash beat, what you goin get? TRASH
Aye, but seriously, when it comes down to bein a better rapper, I outshine you in every single aspect of the word. You are literally no where in a million years good as me. we have around the same amount of songs, but 1/20th of your songs is good.