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Old 11-17-05, 09:04 PM   #13
Ltizzle
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word shits madd loud, lol.

but word beats kidna coo, it do have a western spanish feel, which i like.
i take it speats spit first
actually first i heard from you...
lyrically you pretty decent, you need to work on flow though
theres a few times you fall off, you could easily fix those....
delivery aint bad, emotion isnt either...they could be upped a tad
not too shabby though

LE you pretty decent too
your vocals is MADDDD loud though, hurt my ears dude, lmao.
but uhh lyrically you pretty coo, i liked some of those lines a lot
flow wise you avergae, dont see nuttin to set you aside from the pack but that aint a bad thing really..
emotion/delivery you real solid..
overall you pretty solid, id just work on flow a tad bit, try and make it a lil more creative i unno..

hook is ehh
LE you got some weird ass effect on the lyrics that makes me not understand tha shit at all
id take that off and it might be coo

but work track is aight, yall both pretty decent. word
hit me back yo
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