*listening*

Intro.....if you played with the two seperate tracks that you recorded for it so that one was only coming out the left speaker or some shit like that it would have been a little better quality wise....

First Verse - Flow was a little meh......so was the delivery. Emotion was pretty much not there.....it's like you were just reading the shit. Lyrics were ok.....nothing too special.

Hook - I didn't even realize it was a hook.......you need to put a little more reverb or something on it so it stands out like it's a hook

Second verse - Flow wasn't that great either......but a little better than the first verse. Lyrics were alright......delivery was much better than the first verse.

Overall, I wasn't that impressed with this song, but it was worth a listen.....keep dropping and looking for elevation ™

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