again very nice bro,

even better than the other one i saw from you a few mins ago. Real heart-felt here, emotion was all the way thru the piece.

a few bars i particularly liked:

They Say Smokin' Kills,
Man I Don't Care,
I'd Rather Die Breathin' Smoke Than Livin' In Air,

And I Gotta Say That Life Is Overated,
Cos When Your Dead At Least You Know That You Won't Be Hated

Honestly a lot of potential is with you here. Where in UK u from???

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