Since you were crying.....I guess I'll leave a little feed.

First of all, you need to use the millions of tracks that Cool Edit provides for you instead of trying to do the whole song (including the Hook) in one take......wow. VP was pretty wack. Lyrics were kinda blah as well as flow. You fell off on the flow a lot. Quality was ass......Second dude was a little better with the flow, but he was still kinda wack. I suggest you learn how to use the seperate tracks because that would benifit you greatly......so you can seperate the hook from the regular verses. Plus, read a tutorial or two on how to make your quality sound better.....I suggest the Day 1 Audio Tutorial by Enygma

Do both of these and I guarantee that your shit will be like ten times better ™

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