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Old 11-19-05, 05:19 PM   #17
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From: Jerzy
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Voted For: Wicked One

mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights
^^^no weak opener...
i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe
people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right
^^^No punch weak
if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight"
if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might"
^^^no.....sorry
cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice//
^^^weak closer

My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five...
^^^Ight opener
Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line...
And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes...
^^^Weak
I’ve almost made this place mine...
Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred...
^^^???
And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid...
Actually, that’s what I just done did...
^^ight closer

This was a weak battle both came wit weak verse's yah need to elavate.....snipes ur verse had no punchs or anything good no personal or wordplay....werk on all of it....wicked i thought u were better u had a weak verse wit little diss's....but it was better than snipes.....u get my vote....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

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