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Old 11-20-05, 09:04 AM   #9
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Voted For: Triple_N

Triple_N

Yo I'm glad ya wanted to battle me cuz I stay hungry, man
My punches be peanut butter cuz automatic's known to jam
^hmmmm first line decent set-up, nothing too special though. Last line okay, good wordplay but nothing actually hardhitting 6/10

You beatin' me? HA!!......well, I know you wish you could
So, I'll apoligize now.....
......For slappin u back to when katz thought u was good
^hehe, I like the last line, nice finish-off, solid stuff 6/10

Since I ripped ya ass last year, you stayed witta prollum
Jus accept da fact....
....Ya got no business here like martha stewart in harlem
^good wordplay formed into nice punch, good bar 7/10

I feel bad tho, cuz murkin' da handicapped jus aint right
Dats why I tied 1 arm behind my back to even da fight
^bleh not really feelin it actually, it's decent bar though 4/10

Damn! cripplin' da crippled...now trip has up! & dun it
matic asked for it....
He need to do hip hop like his name & move backwards from it
^rofl @ last line, that killed this bar, nice shit 8/10

Total: 31/50 = 62%, quite solid. I feel like you could've worded some things differently to make em hit harder though. Had some good concepts though, flow was good, vocab was decent, punches were overall okay.

AutoMATIK™

So what if your records nice,wonder why i aint carin?
Cuz we all kno imma smash Triple faster than Hank Aaron
^uhm no...pure self-glorification basically...comparison was aight though 4/10

You aint hard fam i can see through yo tough shit
You're like a cheap condom,you'll pop when u fucked wit
^haha, i'm diggin the last line, first one is basic though 6/10

I wasnt gonna battle ... But i decided to drop ten
Cuz your Barz faker then the ones Ysdat got locked in
^hahah, funny last line, set-up could've been better though 8/10

Matik aint playin fair, cuz the sparks im usin
Will leave em the floor naked like he Marques Houston
^self-glorifying but decent comparison in last line though 6/10

It gets critical when my niggas start throwin the pistol in
Mark the date Nov.19 is when the Triple N's (ends)
^decent nameplay but it's done before and the first line's bleh 6/10

Total: 30/50 = 60%, got some nice comparisons in there, i'm loving the Ysdat-line, overall your set-ups kinda ruin it here and there though, if u upped those u would've won this imo...

Solid battle, not best but decent shit...Triple takes this by a few, both were around same level on this one...
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