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was cool, you had nice imagery throughout... methaphors were on point, multies were eh, but w/e. good emotion you put into it, but i agree w/ whoever said you could've done a LOT better with such a broad topic as this.
"Her perfume lingers in your sense, a tickle in your veins"
^.. i liked this for some reason.
keep it up, and rtf please.
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