Good piece here,
Ive always had the problem of throwing multies into a topical so they would fit well with the basis of the story, but you did it better than most ive seen try. The imagery was probably the highlight of the piece, the first line... As Barbed Wire Hatred Engulfs My Heart... That first line right there, let you know what the topic would be about. A Love lost, broken heart, the pain of loving etc.. the first line really narrated what your story would tell and thats always good. Definately a good piece to get back into topical writing....
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But my teams' still wining the BR Tourney
