not bad not bad at all man, I haven't read anything from you in awhile and well last time I read somin by you it was a lil forced in some spots. But nah man you did good here, nice emotion fa sho. but what really caught my eyes was your imagery and story line, it kept me reading, all though I do wish this was longer. but really I think you gettin to be a very good topical head now man.

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