lol @ lyrics...funny shit....

beat kinda old school n shit....
your flow fits it nice

try using a more ab ab flow...like not necessarily on this beat...but in the future...try practicing that...just so the flow can get more consistent....

delivery is already pretty nice...u dont need a whole lot of upping with that...your energy is pretty good...

one thing i notice you dont add hooks a lot in your songs though....practice your hooks...and really the key to em is simplicity....keep a hook simple...im just saying that cause you dont seem to add a lot of hooks....of course i havent listened to everything youve ever recorded either lol....

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