View Single Post
Old 11-20-05, 05:19 PM   #13
Paranoid
The Paragraph President
 
Paranoid's Avatar
 
Posts: 3,248
From: Sask, Canada
IP:

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

Trip
No offense man, but you came off a lil weak this time, I do thought this was a real good battle and you did come in wit some dope punchlines but some shit was self glorified and I know it dont matter but to me it does. A battle is to mainly diss them which you did but not good enough. to many celeb lines and what not, like off the start you were good and you got rushed probably or somin which made it seem weak in the last 2 snares.
anyway man no hate or anything I just thought you could being it even better.

AutoMaktik
old old, you are rusty but I thought you had a more steady verse. like what I mean is you kept it solid wit punches mostly. the punchlines were hittin pretty good and everything. I just basically thought trip didnt try. if I were you and you want a better battle you should ask trip to do this again cuz I know he's better and so are you. anyway good battle to both.

1 luv y'all
__________________
I don't jack beats; I borrow them.



My Myspace
My Soundclick
Send a message via AIM to Paranoid Send a message via MSN to Paranoid