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Old 11-20-05, 07:01 PM   #69
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Im Runnin on Blanks..and Your Full....But i'll still WriteThis
If u were Nun Thongs Deph still couldnt Contain Tightness
PRETTY GOOD LINE FIRST ONE IS ALL FILLER THOUGH
Rv gave u a Chance 2 Be Great..,,,,.Whyy Didnt u Take It
CopyWritein on Elevators.. ....is how u Protect Elevation
COOL LINE
Real Recognize Real but 2 Me u ....startin 2 look Faceless
Cant Drop Complicated.Ya Avy said stick 2 the Basicks
NO IDEA IF IT REAZLLY SAID THAT SO CANT REALLY COMMENT
Took you 30 minz 2 drop...........guess tha Chi's Timeless
Ya Transvestite Traits....P.rooved your Chi Towns Finest
NOT FEELING THIS BAR
Gave u chance to Win this..the Victory is gettin Crept On
Like Narcoleptics Reading..Ya Writtens is Gettin Slept On
LOL LOVED THIS LINE PROPS
I'll Rob ya Chump Rv Change..U betta Protect ya Wealth
Stop Fingerin ya Anal jus so u can get Indeph wit ya Self
OK BUT BAD SETUP OK LINE
OVERALL SOME OF UR LINES HAD WORDPLAY BUT IT WAS DUMB FLOW AND STRUC WAS ON POINT THROUGHOUT PROPS NOT BAD AT ALL MAKE UR SHIT BIGGER NEXT TIME

I'm too much to handle,Fam you not finna win.
so fuck this battle,cause all Jimmy got in the pocket is Lent.
OK LINE NOTHING GREAT THOUGH
you never sell records.You mouthin up untill you count em.
damn,you' couldn't go platinum after your millionth album.
LIKED THIS LINE LOL KINDA PLAYED THOUGH
You still on that jigga shit,He a biter, accept it.
I better hide my lyrics since you admire his ethics.
LMAO GOOD PERSONAL KILLED IT
king of the midwest?shit this really opened my eyes.
Cause if this bitch run the coast,then noone can rhyme.
OK LINE NOTHING GREAT
You were better as troop,You on a downhill slope.
You always sucked tho, so you 100 underground zero.
OK LINE NOT BAD BUT NOT GREAT COOL
slang these days,the only way your skills benifit.
cause to you bad and good must be a synonym
LOL LOVED THE CLOSER GOOD SHIT

I THINK YOU BARELY GOT THIS BTH HAD SOME GOOD WORDPLAY TROOP HAD BETTER WORDPLAY BUT DEPH BROUGHT THE GOOD PERSONALS AND IT SEALED IT FOR ME BUT U HAD SOME CORNY LINES DOG LOL : /

PLEASE RTF OR ILL D/Q MY VOTE VOTE FOR MY TRACK FEATURED AND ILL HIT UP SOEMTHING ELSE ALSO JSUT DROP LINKS IN THERE
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