Nice piece. I felt a lot of emotion comin from this.
Some lines that i liker were:

I Was Born To Live,
Now I'm Livin' To Die,
Don't Ask Me Any Questions Cos' I Don't Know Why

But When The Lord Does Lay My Ass Down To Rest,
He'll Ask Me If I'm Happy, And I'll Say Yes

Those were pretty nice. Overall i'd give it an 8.5/10. Keep it up man.