On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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aight i'm peepin now....
Production:This is a classic ass devize beat i was def. feelin the beat fortify right?:9/10
Flow:for speats ya flow has gotten better most def. you had decent change ups and what not but you could up that a lil but it was cool:6.5/10,Limited ya Flow was pretty good you rode the beat pretty well.....it sounded cool:7.3/10
Lyrics:Speats you had cool lyrics good rhyme scheme fit beat aight:7.5/10,Limited i liked the diaper line lol that was funny....real cool:8/10
Quality:this is what ya'll both need too up just go up and pick up a new mic and shit...and i know that ya'll both could save and get at least a dynamic mic from radio shack but its aight for the internet:6.5/10
Emotion:Speats you need too up this here thsi is ur weakness so you should up this a lil bit but it was aight:6.5/10,Limited ya emotion was alright you have got better wit it tho so yours was a lil bit better then speats on this:7.5/10
Pressesne:Neither one of you had that great of pressense on the track the intro and outro weren't turned up loud enough but it was alright......
OVerall:This song was ehh alright...nothing i'd download or put on my cd player but it was cool ya'll are starting too come up mad tho soo keep it up :6.5/10
Keep droppin um fams
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