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Old 11-20-05, 11:57 PM   #21
Past Tense
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aight i'm peepin now....

Production:This is a classic ass devize beat i was def. feelin the beat fortify right?:9/10

Flow:for speats ya flow has gotten better most def. you had decent change ups and what not but you could up that a lil but it was cool:6.5/10,Limited ya Flow was pretty good you rode the beat pretty well.....it sounded cool:7.3/10

Lyrics:Speats you had cool lyrics good rhyme scheme fit beat aight:7.5/10,Limited i liked the diaper line lol that was funny....real cool:8/10

Quality:this is what ya'll both need too up just go up and pick up a new mic and shit...and i know that ya'll both could save and get at least a dynamic mic from radio shack but its aight for the internet:6.5/10

Emotion:Speats you need too up this here thsi is ur weakness so you should up this a lil bit but it was aight:6.5/10,Limited ya emotion was alright you have got better wit it tho so yours was a lil bit better then speats on this:7.5/10


Pressesne:Neither one of you had that great of pressense on the track the intro and outro weren't turned up loud enough but it was alright......
OVerall:This song was ehh alright...nothing i'd download or put on my cd player but it was cool ya'll are starting too come up mad tho soo keep it up :6.5/10

Keep droppin um fams
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