Sup Given, this was nice but I felt u tried to hard on this part !!

But my christianisation became a motivation for an invitation for an exorcism
The devils penetration corrupted my graduation, I lost my wanted edification
Discrimination, racism and my spirit were in harmonization, no chance of extermination
My imagination ran wild with discrimination against segregations, I trusted corporations
Dehumanization started with the contamination of a misinterpretation on a radio station
Talking about moral obligation, my conscious, the complete opposite of sanctification.

Don't get me wrong some parts was nice like:

Dehumanization started with the contamination of a misinterpretation on a radio station
Talking about moral obligation, my conscious, the complete opposite of sanctification

I liked what you was saying and I thought it flowed really well,..

but then this bar:
But my christianisation became a motivation for an invitation for an exorcism
The devils penetration corrupted my graduation, I lost my wanted edification
^it just dont make sense to me^^ explain and I will edit my feed.

I like the whole inner flow coz thats how I write when I try, Vocab used well
at times but I felt u did over do it. Flowed well but you did lose a lot on the
part of the verse I highlighted above. I had to read it 3 times just to get the
flow right.

This was nice but I have seen a lot better from you,.. stay up and keep writing.

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