wuz a good topic n had good flow n structure n all but like homie said vocab too baisc for the subject u were describing overall pretty good keep up da good work...btw when u gonna let a nigga know how 2 put a link on my shit so u can quit closin my drop's in om? holla back i sent u a pm u seem 2 b one of da head niggaz on dis site n all so do ya job peace