beat choice is okay. it is what it is.

First verse: your lyrics are on and speak some real truth. The flow's on about 70% of the time, other times, it's one sylable somewhere that's making you force your rhymes together in one line. The main downside to his track is the emotion, which is gonna get sharper as you keep spittin, and the mixing. The emotion in the lyrics coulda brought this up, and the mixing could have brough it out. Good track, just not the best assembly. Don't feel bad, you're not doing anything that I wasn't doing that about the same time into this. The shit that's off comes with time to build, like a muscle. Real talk as always. BTW,


Kill all rats. Your rat is my rat.
snitch not, slip not.

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