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Originally Posted by Dusty Skidz

Just writin' this while my boss is in the shitter, so it's only a quick, easy one

STAY IN TIME WHEN I RHYME,
BUST A BAR, I GET FREE,
I'LL SCHOOL YA WHOLE TEAM NOT TO FUCK WIT ME,

I WANNA LET YOU KNOW THAT YOUR STUCK WIT ME,
I GOT THE SKILLS OF A VET, BUT I'M ONLY 23

I COME TO YOUR AREA AND CAUSE MASS HYSTERIA,
DON'T WANNA LOOK AT ME THE WRONG WAY,
COS' THEN I'D HAVE TO BURY YA,

LIKE A PIT BULL TERRIER,
OR A BOMB THREAT I'M SCARIN' YA,
YOU SAY YOU GOT A WIFE AND KIDS,
DO YOU REALLY THINK I'M CARIN',
HUH?

DUSTY SKIDZ, SO FRESH AND KEEPS SHIT DARK,
YOU HEARD ABOUT MY BITE,
NOW I'M BOUT TO BARK

IT'S A FULL MOON,
I'M A BARK ALL NIGHT,
I'M A BARK IN THE DARK 'TIL THE EARLY LIGHT

MY BASS GONE BURST,
LEAVE YOU DISORIENTATED,
AND IF YOU WANNA TALK SHIT I'LL PUT YOU IN YOUR FUCKING PLACE KID,

I'LL BURN YOUR FUCKING EYES LIKE A CAN OF MACE DID,
AND IF YOU DON'T WANNA GET DROPPED,
THEN STAY OUTTA MY FACE KID

another drop from you in a few days..?? im impressed wiv your attitude. As an audio that would really work. The flow is good, its easy to read so it would be easy to the ear.

Some good rhymes again. You need to start checkin out wat others have been doing. Have a little read thru some other open mics. Look at how peeps pu their verse together. See if there is something you want to try and use. Its not copying really to use someone elses lyrics or flow or something its only bad if you do it in competitions.

By the way Hastings is cool. I have been to Camber every year with my mates for the last five years