Voted For: Defined

I never get concerned about who’s in the lead, I puff Weed
I take on MC’s by the Three’s
Weed out the fake ones that spit from the G’s
^^^WEak opener
Cuz battling Defined is somewhat Disturbin
I’ll beat this fool hella-crunked mad Herbin
^^^No......punch
U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require
I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire
U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire
^^^No....weak this was jus a run on punch
U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs
Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives
^^^WEak
I gotta say ur presence makes me a little Paranoid
Cuz U so but-ugly Ur looks break Polaroid’s
U words so weak cant get strength taking Steroids
^^^IGht....nuthin special
If pain is weakness leaving the Body
Then explain this, why Ur own man passed me the Shoty
^^^No this shit wwas weak
I suggest after this one u stop Attemptin
Cuz ur verses are a waste of space, RV is mad Trippin
Look at ur stupid pic, who the fuck do u think ur Reppin
^^^Weak
2 young 2 be on here Defined needs parental Discretion
2 top it off his queer-ass needs manly Affection
^^^Ight
Im making fun of u cuz I ain’t so Nice
So scratch Ur head like lice, I know Ur Confused
Watch the 6 O’clock News, Ur T.T Crew just left Abused
^^^^Would of been better if u werded it right
Life ain’t fair, u so broke and no one could care
So take off that avatar that says Chamillionare
^^^ight personal....not really a diss
You couldn’t even make a dollar out of 15 Cents
Especially off Ur raps cuz they make no Sense
No one can question that or come 2 ur Defense
^^^weak punch
That’s why Defined, why you’ll always be Behind
Look at Ur own Sig, U once copied mine
^^^No.....this was wack
Look at ur profile; smokin, rappin, Fuckin
Ur rap occupation amounts to Nuttin
Battling me! Now hey kid, u may be Somthin
^^^Ight
U blocking my light with ur fat ass it's evident
I ain’t just the client, I’m the RV president
^^^Wow.....U must like biggie right lol weak closer

Disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge
you have such bad Credit....
........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large
^^^Good opener
your scared, leatherface couldnt compare, your bliss
you Poetic?..text?..you thought it would be Jus-diss
^^^IGht nuthin to special
let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more
youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore
^^^good closer

V/Defined.....Poetics u need to elavate foreal ur Whole verse was weak no punchs or good diss's jus run on shit...get some punchs an personals up...werd...def u came wit a solid verse it wasnt the best but good enough to get the win.....

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^^^RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

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