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Old 11-23-05, 08:53 AM   #10
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Voted For: ~Souljah~

a really good battle from both there. this is how i see it.

Stylez, your verse was great, really original, full of metaphors and hard punches, a colourful use of vocab and some nice multis which gave good rhyming the flow and structure was totally on key.

"My moves be hyperactive... like crack kids doing back flips.
Yours like spankin’ diarrhea-inflicted children. I'll put the belt to you,wack shit."
-my favourite bar of yours. If i could give one bit of advice it would be to aim the verse at him a bit more directly at times and have more personals

Souljah, also a really nice verse. Your punches were relaly good, in fact pretty much every one was on the nose. A lot of personals, the flow was really good and the structure carried well making it easy to follow. It was funny as hell cos of all the personals and the metaphors made it a clever verse too.

"You're honest with your title, not frontin like you're hard*****
Cos only time you're number 1 is when they holding up your score card"
-My fave bar from you. I liked pretty much all of it the same but this stood out. Bars like that wil take you to the top of the text battles

Return the favour please or il get this vote removed