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Old 11-23-05, 03:13 PM   #4
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good 1st piece mos def,
try also using more desciptive words while writing
it'll up the complexity of your work... try the things dex
mentioned n i think you'll improve with each drop...
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impressive first drop, keep it up
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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