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Old 11-23-05, 04:35 PM   #7
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it ight i aint heavy inta gangsta shit cuz to me its overrated..no hate..but shits ight...the beat ight probably sumthin i wouldnt mind spittin to...the flows decent..ehhh the first cat is ight but sounds EXACTLY like cassidy and sounds like shit he would say to..."ima hustla i make it move like simons says"..."this aint rap muzik this is crack muzik"...its EXACTLY like him..so make sure ta add a lil more originality to it but u got the rest of ur shit down..got some dope punchlines...and the second kat is but the same..except for the cassidy part...could have a lil more emotion but its ight...7/10...keep at it...
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