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Old 11-23-05, 05:33 PM   #3
Past Tense
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
 
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peein now

productionamn thats a hot beat but its sampled yet again but hot:8.5/10
Flow:aight the first person ya flow was good....you shoulda turned up ya vocals up a lil more tho:8/10,2nd person sounded the same as the first person it was good tho:8/10,3rd Person his flow was ehh...aight....wasn't that great and quality was ass:7/10
Pressesne:1rst Person was good vocals were too low tho:7.8/10,2nd person same thing:7.8/10
Emotion:All of ur emotions were the same through out the whole beat put more emphesis into wat ur sayin in ur lines:7.8/10
Overall:Overall this track was decent nothin too special ya'll need too work on the emotion and mixing and ya'll would be better:7.5/10

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