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Old 11-23-05, 07:52 PM   #5
Black Dragon
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yo dope track..........1st Verse, flows on point, you ride the beat real well, i like da concept of the song....

2nd Verse- Flows on point, and your gettin your point across, quality is good , feelin ya style man......

Hook - not feelin da hook, quality could be upped, too simplistic....

3rd Verse - Flows on most of the time, quality could be upped, delivery could be worked on.....feelin First MC more thoe......

Overall Dope Track....keep em comin...

pz

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