yo dope track..........1st Verse, flows on point, you ride the beat real well, i like da concept of the song....
2nd Verse- Flows on point, and your gettin your point across, quality is good , feelin ya style man......
Hook - not feelin da hook, quality could be upped, too simplistic....
3rd Verse - Flows on most of the time, quality could be upped, delivery could be worked on.....feelin First MC more thoe......
Overall Dope Track....keep em comin...
pz
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215435