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Old 11-24-05, 09:34 AM   #8
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Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Ya not known ... And thats why nobody's clowned you yet
But i can show you the ropes kid, That i'll put around ya neck
^^decent opener
Youre fading to less .... Too much is played in his text
Ya spits wouldnt be fuckin rich if bitches paid you for sex
^^good flow ok punch
Blackmage is a pussy, Plus i bet he's a bitch and a hoe
The last time he pulled out a burner, He was fixing a stove
^^eh.ok
It aint a secret that you're out of place in rap like dicking a dyke
Quit ... Because you wont shine for a second like flickering lights
^^i liked this....decent
This beef aint over ... All you can do is survive or get clapped
Cuz id only bury the hatchet ... If you was disguised as an axe
^^lol,....koo
Trust me ya wack, Your past battles were simple, Mines a rocky road
Face the facts, ya getting rammed, with more punches than hockey pros
^^good closer.......

consistent verse, nothing spectacular but it was sloid throughout most of it.........good shit

Your "Tracks" drop your a "peel" like a mario kart crash
you don't spit you drop shit, guess that makes you a smart ass
^^wasnt feeling this at all
your art lasts as long as oil pascals in a rain storm
I saw your "intelligent" flo's and i'm waiting for a brain to form
^^ok, but way to simple
wait whore, so many words for pussy but so celebate
you forgot this one on your little list...FLOW INTELLIGENT
^^wack
Your more irrelevant virgin, I admit your flo's tighter
but bite fat free rhymes, fore i excercise the ghost writers
^^wack
you've "split" your "personlality" to the two sides of wackness
don't vacation from wackness, I don't want you to lose practice
^^nope, really bad concept yo
the epitome of greatness? well i'm thinking no
cause i'm pretty sure that ther are 5 lakes with a lil more flo
^^why, like i got it but it was wack

i wasnt feelin any of your verse, your punches lacked
creativity n exacution....terrible verse man, no hate but try
to elevate alot b4 you take on cats that use metas n wordplay in each of their bars..pc
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!