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Originally Posted by Red Bull
This was an ok one.
Fraud got it..tho he had too many internals in there.And overusage of the word dick.Making it sound awkward
I'm sorry. I forgot those were positive points.
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That's only about his wording..nothing about the concept he had.I thought the concept he had was good.Just he tried too hard for a flow..
But still...DID I SAY "HIS PUNCH WAS WACK?"..Like you claim?