Voted For: ~Souljah~

You’re the bad-acting star of a prison rape scene after they punch your face in.
You a gay joke. You stay poked more than Asian acupuncture patients.
^^no need for "asian" it had no context, but ok punch
My moves be hyperactive... like crack kids doing back flips.
Yours like spankin’ diarrhea-inflicted children. I'll put the belt
to you,wack shit.
^^played concept
Slash this. I'll grind you like an Axle. C0ck my gun. Give you a rose.
What's Curly is how I make your toes go, plus my pubes below your nose.
^^wasnt feelin it, way to choppy
I thought you were some grimacing sinister mister, but on closer inspection,
I see you just want my penis as the centerpiece of your boner collection.
^^lol,..wtf, not much of a punch
Rock out. You get knocked out. Dangerous. I'll harm you if you dare me.
Murder you. Hurry up and bury you in Mount Carmel Cemetery.
^^wasnt feelin the closer much
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you had a couple decent bars but alot of extra content that wasnt needed to get your punch across effectively...
no a bad verse,above average for a rookie i suppose..
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.Your ~style'z~ the epitomy of shite your time is wasted
Fow's-so-wuck-ey-ink* you got a speech impediment like Mase did
^^ok opener, nothin overly great
Hate to hear him free(style).....his written's a waste of a page
He's the only bum i know who don't beg for pocket change**
^^nah wasnt feelin this
You'll never be sick, you bout as nice as a kick in the groin
Your crew rate me higher............................................ .....
..............................let you walk, while BEGGIN me to join
^^decent setup, punch lacked creativity
You're more ridiculous than Uncle Phil doin jumpin jacks
You're like 50; both pocket change and equally as wack
^^imo, this was dope
You're honest with your title, not frontin like you're hard*****
Cos only time you're number 1 is when they holding up your score card
^^hmm, not bad, ok closer..
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this was closer then i expected, souljah picked it up near the end of his verse, n on that note i gotta go with him, he had more effective punches throughout his verse.

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!