lmao i think that intro was funny as fuck
production:Yeah it was pretty ill.....lieks the bass line:8/10
Flow:Yeah you def. improved ya flow like crazy it was mad hot man that was fuckin hot for real:8/10
Pressense:Ya pressense was good fit the track well....rode teh beat well:7.8/10
emotion:Emotion was really good you meant what you said in ur lines but you should have put a lil bit more into it would have been really hot...
OVerall:This was a pretty good song i like the outro and if that was really your mom lol thats funny...keep this shit upthat was hot i like the creativity of this keep um comin:8/10
werrd keep droppin willa peer i was feelin it
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rtf
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