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Old 11-27-05, 10:42 AM   #41
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Voted For: Affliction

Affliction:

Your a fucking joke, like your name you just a con
He all talk but no action, when it goes down
.................................................I n panties he runs
not really
My punches will make you bleed, so the bull wont duck you
Kid wants to battle jack the ripper, cause his
...........................................Hormone s was going crazy dude
didnt make sense..
If you had your alias name, you still wouldnt see sickness
and if you win this battle, it only mean you in the
.................................................. .....Prostitution business
no
Look at his OM you can tell his punches arent tight
Brush your teeth barbie tooth paste is the only time you spit nice
nope...
Since you aint on your alias name no more, your punches is not in effect
Your punches dont connect like a broke 1-800 collect
ok, could have been worded better

icy-hot:

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like un-seen paint-cans drop from roof top building,
i'll fuck u'r day up w/ an on-top hit that'll crack ya frame like show'in a naked pic to ya moms about her gay children.... 1
fuck no..stretched as hell..
raps my addiction... battles skills u have are all fiction
my bitches i'll chop ya penius off.. then blame her A_dick_tion....(adiction) 2
no........
ya need to build up ya skills or get filled up with steel,
that'll drive a hole deeper in ya then oil-drills,
plus u'r erotic hit feels, like a preteen massage'in tits befor Da blow-up-doll-fill's....3
uhhh no
u'r fake spits, make shit, look like ya saliva came from a crayola-paint-set,
ya verse almost had me like a precher who seen a saint scrips ready to Faint-quick 4
stretched..no..
rip ya face with a blade N toss aicd till ya skin fade-away,
only reason u'll be here longer, cuz he stuck on the net serchin for hes flow-like-tidle-wave 5
played and wack

Explination- Both had wack verses..icy-hot's verse was stretched as hell...punches were wack..maybe had one close to decent one..but overall had a weak ass
verse..your one attemp at wordplay was horrible..Affliction had one decent bar, the collect line..everything else i didnt get or wasnt good..overall vote- Affliction, for having less-weaklines..
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