sorry it took so long...lol

aiight.... i always liked this beat so ya get kudos for that

content:lyrics were aiight.... i focus on lyrics when i hear tracks so i'm real critical when it comes to that.... you're one of the few kats who actually puts messages in they shyt... that's a plus... but.... you also need to find an original way to flip it..that's a minus.... so ya cancelled out in this category.... not good... but not bad.... AVERAGE

Flow:... ok for da most part... still need to work on filling in da spaces.... it has to be consistant all the way thru... can't flow then get choppy when ya get stuck on an idea... find the work around and keep ya flow on point.... the old addage says practice makes perfect... you'll get it... but only if ya practice....AVERAGE

quality... better than mine when i first started but still needs work... not sure what ya need to do to fix it cuz people like certain sounds and effects... find your sound... master it... but most importantly make sure that we can hear you clearly and ya levels are the same throughout

emotion: work on it.... if you don't believe what you saying at least convince ya audience that you believe what you saying.... in turn, ya audience will believe what ya saying and connect with you a lot better... feel me?... rapping is a lot like acting... you gotta get into character and PERFORM ya song... you just can't spit the words at people and think it's gonna be aiight with everyone... HOW you spit makes a difference

not bad overall but like the rest of us there's always room for elevation... holla at the mad dog battle if ya get a chance... kats is sleepin'

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