this was thought provoking fam,. i enjoyed the read.
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this line seemed a bit off in the end thou
The love for your earth remained,but now extracted
i tried to use natural disaster's,no tone human reacted
.....................................^^no human tone reacted
i just feel thats the context you m,eant, the other way
im not gettin that line...
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but some serious quotables that i saw, for example..
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tears enter my cheeks presence, I procced to pause
I feel empty like like a coffin holding a eroded corpse
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Positioning myself in the triumph of his finalised view
Aranging my life's long metaphore,but still unsure what to do
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two best bars in my eyes, dope read...
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rtf on my om....."times have changed"

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!