need more HIGHS on ur vocals...too much rumble/lows


and I'm not exactly sure I like using Jay's hook verbatim...unless you put a new spin on it, which you didn't do


Your rhyming has def. elevated a lot since you first started rappin...It was very simple and now it's solid at best



lyrics personal = good


flow was adequate, if not uninspired...cud be more expressive...that goes along with delivery...rather bland for this type of track...

And, in my opinion, you didn't put enough of a different spin on this track to make me forget about Jay's version, the problem when you re-do a song or use a famous beat.


Pretty decent track dawg

keep droppin

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