Alright, this was good for a keystyle. Something lacked in it though, can't actually put my finger on it. The metaphor in the first line was catchy and it made me read more. Toward the ending it became boring. The concept is good, could've been more creative, but none the less its all good. You had a good balance in your vocab. good poem for a keystyle.

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Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
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Smartone Freal:
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