When i first saw your name i thougt youd be another cat talking about multies and then your verses wouldnt have any. But i was very impressed with this piece and you can without a doubt put mad multies into your pieces which is good.
The concept was dark and original so i was really feeling this piece.
Originality is rare today so i always enjoy reading these types of pieces, the story was told well the detail was brilliant graphic too which always make a verse stand out. The vocab fit perfect with the concept it helped you write wicked imagery.
Its cool to picture what your writing down and i was visualising what i was reading which is rare with writtens so you got my props for this piece.
The flow was cool a lot of multies so im glad you lived up to your name.
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