this was a decent piece, a little choppy near the end,
the continuess,,,,,,,,, didnt help your flow.
i thought your vocab was appropriate, you didnt over due
it, structure...well imo you shouldve left it without periods
to even everything out.. but other then those points i think this was pretty
good, closer was your strongest part outta your verse..
which is ultimately very important.....
rtf on "times have changed"...pc

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!